Script progress Episode 1 progress

Script 1 version 1

With this very first Draft we worked on the very basics so as to have a skeleton to build upon, we had a clear idea of the structure of the episode so we built upon that conceptual idea, with each read through we did, the scriptwriters would stay in their own time, look through their notes and see what was and wasn't working, taking the jokes that were said at the read through and slotting them into seemingly blank areas

Script 1 version 2

With the second version of the first script and after the first script read through with the crew; we went away and filled in the filler section and tried to devise some more dialogue for the characters to interact with each other with. It is bare I must admit but it is the frame work that we've built and continue building upon because we can use these as a basis for the next 2 scripts as well so we won't need to build frame work, we will just need to work on making it seem as real as poossible while still keeping our concept

Script 1 version 3

With the 3rd script we worked tirelessly to get it to at the very least 10 pages while still making the narrative structure seem to flow smoothly without any hiccups. With this copy we moved straight onto the official software to write scripts, Celtx. Which also gives us a rough estimate as to how long each page may run because each page on Celtx would usually equate to 1 minute in speaking time.

Script 1 version 4

Version 4 was the correction of a few jokes, adding more dialogue and making changes here and there until it was perfect. After this copy any changes that were made were solidified as ideas and dialogue as most of the group was happy with the 4th but it needed some tweaks.