With this very first Draft we worked on the very basics so as to have a skeleton to build upon, we had a clear idea of the structure of the episode so we built upon that conceptual idea, with each read through we did, the scriptwriters would stay in their own time, look through their notes and see what was and wasn't working, taking the jokes that were said at the read through and slotting them into seemingly blank areas.
Script 1 version 2
Script 2 version 3
With the second version of the script we had a clear idea of the basic dialogue but were struggling with some of the jokes.
Script 2 version 3
With the 3rd script we worked tirelessly to get it to at the very least 10 pages while still making the narrative structure seem to flow smoothly without any hiccups. We made the 10 pages however changes still needed to be changed, something just didn't seem to fit as right as others.
Script 1 version 4




































