With this very first Draft We had a good solid ground on where we wanted to end and how to start, the problem was getting the dialogue to fit between and make sure it could flow and make sense along with the other scripts
Script 1 version 2
Script 1 version 3
Script 1 version 4
Unfortunately with the second script it was becoming more difficult to come up with and make dialogue for each of the characters so that all 10 minutes are taken up.
Script 1 version 3
With the 3rd script we worked tirelessly to get it to at the very least 10 pages while still making the narrative structure seem to flow smoothly without any hiccups.
Script 1 version 4




































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